1. Have you included the number of shots you planned?
During our filming, we included most of the shots that we wanted to use. However we didn't include any close-ups, as we didn't have enough time.
2. Does your piece have pace/atmosphere?
Our project had a consistent pace throughout, as we wanted the victim to be running, which would keep the audience alert. However we wouldn't say there was a real atmosphere, as it has not been edited as we picked up lots of background sounds e.g people talking.
3. How could it be improved?
Our project could be improved in a number of ways. Firstly we needed to make sure that the audience would fully understand what is happening e.g a shot of the victim pressing the button to open the doors, then cutting to a shot of the victim coming out of the doors. Also we think that if we had more time, we could of made the shots more accurate and in general, make the filming more fluent to create a better outcome.
4. Does it make sense/flow?
We think that our filming includes some sense of fluency in parts, and that it does make sense mostly.
